Hola, soy estudiante de inglés y tengo que presentar este assignment sobre una carta formal. Necesito ayuda para que me corrigan los errores de escritura y puntuación.
Las consigans del assignment son las sieguientes:
You start a new job as a secretary in your local branch of a large but not very modern company whose headquarters are in Britain. Everything at your new place is old-fashoned, and much of it is either broken or seriously ineficient. You complain about this to your immediate superior, who tells you that "if you don't think we're good enough for you here" you should write to the (British) managher. The answer angers you, and you decide that you will write the letter.
Choose either two or three things about the premises that you would like replaced with more modern equipment or facilities. Describe the deficiencies and inadequancies of the present equipment/facilities, suggest replacements and explain why the expense would be justified. Write about a 150 words.
- Remember, you are new and you are only a secretary in this big company. Unless you are tactful, you can make a very bad impression on your new boss. Conversely, if you can demonstrate the inadecuancy of the present equipment withiout giving offence, and show that the improvements would benefit the company, this could be the start of an important career development
La carta que escribi la puse como archivo adjunto, pero por las dudas la pango en esta ventana.
78 Threadle Avenue
Leeds LS18 7QT
99 Harvey Smith Avenue
Cambridge CB3 SSJ
May 14th 2007
I have been working in your company for three month now, and in many ways I am very comfortable with my job. Nevertheless, there are one or two details that should be taken into consideration.
First, the computer which is a very old model. This represents a real problem, on the one hand it has no mouse an the keyboard is not working well enough, which makes difficult to finish the work on time and on the other hand the version of Windows is not compatible with the latest program , ZG 9. 2, that the company has recently incorporated.
Secondly, the furniture are, in fact, not very satisfactory in other respects as well – there is no further space to file the client’s information and the drawers and doors do not shut properly. For this reason all the material of March and April has not been printed.
I would be most grateful if you would reply as soon as possible so that this matter can be resolved to everyone’s satisfaction.
Desde ya muchas gracias, y espero sus comentarios.